Overall it is ok but I have 2 comments:
1. You talk about what customers seek when looking for a trip. Conceptually I would rather focus only on our business activities.
2. You didn’t talk about “the persons” which is the most important element in our model. The graphic is cute although I ‘d try to warm it up a bit with, even few, photographic images.
P.S. Also consider our web site as a starting point for the use of colors and the overall graphic: www.evolutiontravel.it
Ciao :)
thanks!
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